Friday, June 1, 2012

Writing Tip #7 – Don’t be afraid to get it wrong

My husband, Herman, has taken several screenwriting classes with me and also participates in a weekly writing group of screenwriters. Last summer he outlined an excellent idea for a script, and then spent several weeks working on the first act. When he presented that first act, about twenty pages, to our writer’s group, they were somewhat critical but supportive. They gave Herman a lot to think about, including other options for where to start his story. It was all good feedback. 

The problem was, Herman is a perfectionist who hates criticism. He thanked everyone for the input, even agreed with much of it, and has not written a word on his script since then. He is so afraid to write something that others may feel is not perfect, that he doesn’t write anything. He keeps talking about his story, trying to work out the ideal set of scenes in his mind, but frankly, talking doesn’t get the baby washed. 

I believe it was Hemingway who said: “All first drafts are shit!” And he wasn’t talking about just his first drafts, he was talking about all writer’s first drafts.

Good writing is rewriting and rewriting and rewriting. My first script teacher told me that the average script gets rewritten over twenty times before anyone takes it seriously. I usually make five to six passes through a manuscript before I submit my novel to a publisher.

The idea is to get something down. Make it as good as you can, understanding all the time that you will need to go back and edit, edit, then polish, polish. Sometime you go back and realize that it’s just not right for the story, or drags the pacing down, or that it doesn’t add enough to justify being there. So you cut it. And that’s ok. Much better to cut something than end up with warts sprinkled though your story.

So, bottom line for this week is: when you’re writing a first draft, have the courage to write it down. Even if you know you’re going to throw it way, get your ideas down on paper. You won’t know how good or how bad it is until it’s on paper. The worst thing that will happen is you toss it out and start over. And if you do that, I guarantee the next pass will be better.

Have the courage to write everyday, even if what you’re writing is crap. If you do that, the writing will get better. And frankly, that’s the only way it gets better.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Absolutely! Great advice.

It reminds me very much of the "shut off the internal editor" during National Novel Writing Month. It's all about getting the quantity out on paper before worrying about the quality. Chances are, mixed in with a lot of not so great writing will be a lot of writing worth keeping. It's just a matter of being able to figure out which is which and that's a hard thing to do, especially for writers- we're so close and personal with our own writing, it's sometimes hard to separate our feelings from the critique and advice of others who can see it from a perspective we can't.

It can also be a very hard thing for a perfectionist to achieve- the balance between writing good and writing well and knowing what's worth keeping and what needs tweaking.

Don't give up Herman! No matter the criticism/critique- it helps you learn and grow!

Keep giving him encouragement, Alan, as I can tell you certainly do. :)